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 <h2>A Little About Myself</h2>
 <p>I try to be friendly and a hardworking teamplayer with people around me. I deeply appreciate those to are kind to me and give them my best at all times. I have a rather small social circle so I treasure everyone around me. I like cats a lot.</p>
 
-</p>I have a strong passion for technology and computers. I try to complete tasks as efficiently as possible and find out the mechanics behind things I use. As such, I love learning new things and picking up novel skills. Sometimes when I get into a tough spot while working on a tough nut, I will consult experts or try it differently to learn more.</p>
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-<p>I am also a strong supporter of FLOSS software. I try to use as much FLOSS software as I can in my daily life.</p>
+</p>I have a strong passion for technology and computers. I push myself to complete tasks as required and learn the mechanics of the tools I use. As such, I love learning new things and picking up novel skills. I am also a strong supporter of FLOSS software.</p>
 
 <h2>Current Skillset</h2>
-<p>I'm current a professional services engineer working at Napier Technologies. I experiment and develop my skills on the Linux infrastructure. I currently self-host this website and some other applications like Nextcloud, Gitea, etc. Do look up my blog to see what am I currently working on or view my CV to get more info.</p>
+<p>I'm current a professional services engineer working at Napier Technologies. I experiment and develop my skills on the Linux infrastructure. I currently self-host this website, Gitea, and others. Do look up my blog to see what am I currently working on or view my CV to get more infomation.</p>
 
 <h2>What Do I Like (Besides Technology?)</h2>
-<p>I game, watch movies/anime, and cook. I love having a warm cup of coffee before starting work. My top 3 favourites are Up, Interstellar, and Avengers: Endgame. Even so, I spend most of my time grinding away at the homelab.</p>
+<p>I play video games, watch movies/anime, and cook. I love having a warm cup of coffee before starting work. My top 3 favourite movies are Up, Interstellar, and Avengers: Endgame. But really, I spend most of my time grinding away at the lab.</p>
 
 <h2>That's all. It was nice to have you. I hope to see you again.</h2>
-<p> I would like to thank Pei Yi, my friends and my family; without them, this website would not have been possible.</p>
+<p> I would like to thank Pei Yi, my friends and my family; without their love and support, the fruits of my efforts would not have been possible.</p>
 
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